Aet Lindling

Erm, I hate to be a party pooper, but it isn't all that great. I mean, it's very good, but as they say on the website, "There is much more ...

"Last time he meet" should be "The last time he met" "I sorry, Wolf" should be "I'm sorry, Wolf" “I’m sorry to hear that. But can’t you call me Lethero." ...

The [s]wing[/s] wind stung her eyes as she tried to make it [s]though[/s] through . The house wasn’t more than one hundred feet [s]away[/s] away, but because of the way ...

Yaaaay! *can't wait for usergroup usergroup*

I don't believe that most homosexuals are born gay despite the mounting evidence? Well, that's up to you, I suppose. Aaaaactually, they recently discovered the gene that decides which gender ...

Yeah, she's been doing that... Luckily, good ol' Clau/Till/Suzanne came 'round and deleted all of her self-critiques. :D

Ooh, I loved it. ... No, really. No changing here. ... Eeeexcept that "8.45" should be "8:45". And chocoholic, "dryly" is a word, look it up. :P ~Aet

The poem is confusing I know because I wrote it. But it isn't terrible like ya'll said. Its just differnent. I agree on some of the critique but not all. ...

Okay, first off, the grammar. You forget to capitalize "I" in a few places, it seems you do so where there's a contraction. Even you attach "I" to "am" to ...

Like "bell", and then "a"? XD Congrats, JC.

Triwizard Tournament. (dragon eggs)

(haha, Linds) Dragon.

It's cool, don't worry 'bout it. By the way, I think you mean "hear the heart", not "tear the hear".

(my hundredth review, yay.) Okay, first off, like Sumi said, I have no idea why you decided to review your own work. It doesn't really help you improve, and really ...

(so my first post in the debate usergroup will be this. XD) I'd like to point out something that hasn't been mentioned yet... She obviously did not do this for ...